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Posted 22.03.13 in Workshop

Get feedback on your poem from Clare Pollard!

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Brilliant poet Clare Pollard offered fifty lucky poets the opportunity to send in a poem and receive feedback. Unfortunately we couldn’t pass on all the great entries we received, so for those who weren’t randomly selected, the Young Poets Network team has compiled a list of tips and advice based on all the poems that came in.

Here at YPN we strongly believe in the value of redrafting your poems and Clare agrees:

The idea of the poet scrawling down perfect poems is a seductive one, and many have played with the idea of a visitation from the muse – the Beats pouring out spontaneous, jazz-like rhythms; Frank O’Hara penning Lunch Poems on his lunch breaks.   But the truth is, most poets I know spend weeks and even months getting poems right.  Redrafting is part of being a poet.  And actually, for many of us, it’s the fun part – the hours spent lost in words, tinkering and experimenting; polishing your ideas to perfection.  Still, when you’re starting out, redrafting can make your brain melt a bit.  What if you change it so much you lose what’s good about the poem in the first place?  And how do you know when to stop?  Often it can be useful to get an outside reader’s opinion: a new pair of eyes to look over your work.  So I’m very pleased to be able to give feedback on your poems over the next few weeks…

We invited young poets aged 25 and under to send in a single poem and receive feedback from Clare. Fifty lucky poets were randomly selected – though we were so impressed with the talent and variety that poured into our inbox, we wished we could have passed them all on! So for those of you who didn’t receive personalised feedback, the YPN Team have compiled this list of tips and advice based on all the poems that came in.

Titles

Have fun with your titles! You should be giving the same care to your titles as you would any other line of the poem – it’s the first thing someone sees! You could think of it as the front door of your poem.

Sometimes it works to have an untitled poem – though you need to think hard about what point you are making by leaving it untitled. This is not a neutral statement – it’s saying something quite particular about your piece of work.

Consider what message you want to give to the reader before they start reading your poem. Do you want to give them a way into the poem, or send them off in the wrong direction so the content of the poem is a surprise?

Stuck for a title? Is there a phrase in your poem which you feel captures the mood or theme of the whole piece? Is there a well-known phrase, quotation or title which might suit your poem?

Matthew Sweeney’s article Finding a Title explores how a good title makes all the difference.

Rhyme

Rhyme is a great tool for a poet to have – finding the right rhyme of half-rhyme for a word can be extremely satisfying, and sounds good when it echoes in the reader’s ear. But poems don’t have to rhyme, and they don’t have to have a regular rhyme scheme, either.

Sometimes rhymes work better in the middle of the line – this is called internal rhyme – so they are not as obvious, but still sound musical. Half-rhyme (e.g. ear/stare, one/alone) is also another great way to chime words together without distracting from the flow of the poem.

Don’t let rhyme take over your poem! Make sure your lines sound as if a contemporary person might say them – we don’t twist our words around to put the rhyming word at the end of a sentence, and the poem shouldn’t do this at the end of a line either.

Repetition

Repetition can be a great thing in a poem – there might be a phrase or idea you keep coming back to like a refrain, because it is so powerful, or represents the heart of what you are talking about. But remember your poem needs to move along too.

Repetition often occurs in lists or adjectives or describing words. Look at what you are describing and make sure that every word says something different.

There’s a well-known maxim in poetry that every word should count – and this is very true! Make sure everything in your poem is doing plenty of work and contributing to the poem as a whole.

Making sense

Poems are a great space to play around with ideas and language, but readers can feel alienated if the poem is too hard to understand. Of course poems thrive on suggestions and ambiguity, but the reader needs enough background knowledge to understand what is ambiguous and what might be suggested!

Think about what you want your readers to get from the poem. Then look through your poem with a critical eye and check that everything is in place to help the reader reach this awareness.

 
Thank you to everyone who sent in their poems, and keep up the good work! There was amazing imagery, language and themes in all the poems and some exciting experiments going on.

Remember that Young Poets Network regularly posts challenges and other poetry opportunities, so check back soon or better still sign up and be kept totally up to date!

 

 Clare Under sign saying poet Clare Pollard’s first collection of poetry, The Heavy-Petting Zoo (Bloodaxe, 1998), was written whilst she was still at school and her fourth collection Changeling (Bloodaxe, 2011) was a Poetry Book Society Recommendation. Her play The Weather (Faber, 2004) premiered at the Royal Court Theatre and her documentary for radio, My Male Muse, was a Radio 4 Pick of the Year.  Her new translation of Ovid’s Heroines will be published by Bloodaxe in May 2013.

Comments (29)

29 Responses to “Get feedback on your poem from Clare Pollard!”

  1. Émilie Claire says:

    Does my current place of residence have to be in the UK in order to submit?

  2. علی امینی says:

    So nice

  3. Viveka says:

    Feedback would help so much…so will take a chance:)

  4. Emily says:

    I tried sending my email but it says that the address I’m sending it to isn’t reconized. What should I do?

  5. Emily says:

    Oh thanks, I didn’t copy and paste and I messed it up, it sent that time. Thank you!!

  6. Harry Drane says:

    Sounds nice! I’ll be sure to send in one of my poems, and cross my fingers that it’s chosen! Perhaps, I should start crossing them now…

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  8. Emma says:

    Can it be the poem I entered for the current Foyles Young Poetry Competition 2013? :)

    • Young Poets Network says:

      Hi Emma,
      That’s fine – ideally poets only submit one version of their poem to Foyle Young Poets but if you redraft the poem you’ve already entered you can submit it again. Good luck!

  9. Ayesha Sahar Mirza says:

    Can i send a poem that i have already send to another poetry competition of Foyles Young Poetry Competition? I wish I get chosen. I really appreciate these types of competitions.

    • Young Poets Network says:

      Hi Ayesha, Glad you are pleased with the competition! Yes you can send in a poem you have entered to Foyle Young Poets. It’s generally best if poets only submit one version of their poem to Foyle but if you rewrite the poem you have already entered after you get feedback from Clare then you can submit it again. Good luck!

  10. Helen says:

    Hi YPN! I was wondering whether the maximum line count of 25 includes white spaces between stanzas? Or is it only lines of text that count? Thank you!

  11. Emily Clark says:

    Hello! Just wondering, if Helen hasn’t replied by now does that mean we didn’t get picked? Thanks!

    • Young Poets Network says:

      Hi Emily, the poems have only just gone to Clare so everyone will hear whether or not they were randomly selected in the next 2-3 weeks.

  12. Ayesha Sahar Mirza says:

    I really like this poetry competition and I would truly love to enter this competition but I would like to ask a questition. I wanted to ask when the deadline is. I know this is a stupid question but please answer it. Waiting for your reply……..

    • Young Poets Network says:

      Hi Ayesha, it’s not a stupid question! I’m afraid the deadline has passed for sending your poem to Clare Pollard but there will be many more opportunities coming soon!

  13. shirish suman says:

    great stuff. I always enjoy participating in these competitions and workshops. It’s a source of motivation and really helps a lot.

  14. Lisa Santika Onggrid says:

    I’ve received my feedback. Thank you very much YPN and Clare Pollard for the opportunity! I’m now redrafting my poem and the feedback is invaluable to the process.
    Looking forward for another great program!

  15. Medha Patel says:

    i have seriously missed such a golden opportunity..:(

  16. Katie says:

    I love these kind of competitions. Have the poems been chosen yet?

  17. Nadya says:

    oh no :( I missed a wonderful opportunity… i could really do with some advice!

    • Young Poets Network says:

      Hi Nadya, if you sign up to Young Poets Network you’ll be kept up to date with all our opportunities! For a whole feature of advice, see our Top Tips articles 1 and 2 – and you could also have a look at our Poetry Opportunities to see if there are any writing groups or other organisations near you.